It's like Labour never learns. I like all of those 10 pledges, but where is the stuff about business, the economy, rejuvinating run down parts of the country, building infrastructure?
If it was me i'd have added some pro business spin on all of them.
My add-ons to his 10 pledges.
1. Increase income tax for the top 5% of earners, reverse the Tories' cuts in corporation tax and clamp down on tax avoidance, particularly of large corporations. No stepping back from our core principles.
I'd have added tax breaks for new businesses and SME's setup inside low tax business zones created in deprived parts of the country. This would encourage businesses to go to these parts of the country, create jobs, encourage small businesses to setup and give them breathing room within the first 5 years.
2. Abolish Universal Credit and end the Tories' cruel sanctions regime. Set a national goal for wellbeing to make health as important as GDP; Invest in services that help shift to a preventative approach. Stand up for universal services and defend our NHS. Support the abolition of tuition fees and invest in lifelong learning.
I'd have added a bit about removing unnessacary red tape to make help easier to get, muttered about the homeless and soldiers and talked about getting tough on benefit fraud and NHS tourism.
3. Put the Green New Deal at the heart of everything we do. There is no issue more important to our future than the climate emergency. A Clean Air Act to tackle pollution locally. Demand international action on climate rights.
I'd have labelled this the green industrial revolution. Setting up new factories industries around the country (especially in deprived areas) to manufacture green technology at a large scale to become an international market leader in green-tech.
4. No more illegal wars. Introduce a Prevention of Military Intervention Act and put human rights at the heart of foreign policy. Review all UK arms sales and make us a force for international peace and justice.
I'd have also talked about creating specialised forces to deal with counter terrorism at home and abroad and upgrading our military capability to protect our borders and national interests. Also could have blagged something about cyber forces to protect our digital frontiers.
5. Public services should be in public hands, not making profits for shareholders. Support common ownership of rail, mail, energy and water; end outsourcing in our NHS, local government and justice system.
I'd add something about private management to ensure all public own services are profit making and not a burden on the taxpayer.
6. Full voting rights for EU nationals. Defend free movement as we leave the EU. An immigration system based on compassion and dignity. End indefinite detention and call for the closure of centres such as Yarl's Wood.
None of the racists that Labour have to appeal to are going to support this. I'd have not mentioned this at all until firmly in number 10. If he must insist then he should also talk about points based systems, quicker deportation of criminals and illegals, restrict access to benefits to anyone who hasn't paid into the system for 10 years etc. Migrant worker tax.
7. Work shoulder to shoulder with trade unions to stand up for working people, tackle insecure work and low pay. Repeal the Trade Union Act. Oppose Tory attacks on the right to take industrial action and the weakening of workplace rights.
I'm all for this one, but the people hating Tories and their media dogs always hide behind the small business owner on this one. "Workers rights will destroy shit small businesses who can't survive without exploiting their workers". Well for those shit small businesses i propose tax and NI insurance breaks for employing under 21's and also tax breaks for employing staff on mummy hours. Mummy hours is a new thing i'm proposing where employers allow mums to work 9-3 mon-friday during term times only. There are millions of jobs which could be done on these shifts, allowing mums to look after kids and be in the workforce. Also end zero hours contracts!
8. Push power, wealth and opportunity away from Whitehall. A federal system to devolve powers – including through regional investment banks and control over regional industrial strategy. Abolish the House of Lords – replace it with an elected chamber of regions and nations.
I don't fully understand the implications of this so that puts me in the same boat as most of the British electorate. I'd suggest throwing in something about loving the Queen though - that'll get the idiot vote. Also kick Harry and Meghan.
9. Pull down obstacles that limit opportunities and talent. We are the party of the Equal Pay Act, Sure Start, BAME representation and the abolition of Section 28 – we must build on that for a new decade.
Great stuff, but it needs to mention the greatest downtrodden in the western world, the white man apparently. Yep - the WWC or the White "non working for multiple generations" class do need a leg up, or a pat on the back, or just to be told that there is a job for them that an illegal immigrant goat herder in an foreign land with no qualifications and no language skills who is illiterate can't steal from them.
10. Forensic, effective opposition to the Tories in Parliament – linked up to our mass membership and a professional election operation. Never lose sight of the votes 'leant' to the Tories in 2019. Unite our party, promote pluralism and improve our culture. Robust action to eradicate the scourge of antisemitism. Maintain our collective links with the unions.
I'd add a bit about being willing to work with government and other parties wherever possible for the wider benefit of the country, nation over party etc.